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영어문법 검사 꼼꼼하게 부탁드려요 Our project aims to tackle environmental issues caused by fast

영어문법 검사 꼼꼼하게 부탁드려요

Our project aims to tackle environmental issues caused by fast fashion by promoting slow fashion. We encourage people to buy less, reuse more, and choose sustainable options. Through activities like clothing swaps, we can reduce textile waste and raise awareness.주제선정 이유I chose this project to highlight the negative impacts of fast fashion and to present sustainable alternatives for our planet느낀점 We can reduce fashion waste through this project.People will become more aware of sustainable choices through this projectI learned that small changes matter.

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Our project aims to address the environmental issues caused by fast fashion by promoting the principles of slow fashion. We encourage people to buy less, reuse more, and choose sustainable options. By organizing activities like clothing swaps, we can help reduce textile waste and raise awareness about sustainable fashion.

I chose this project to shed light on the negative effects of fast fashion and to promote sustainable alternatives that are better for our planet.

  • This project can help reduce fashion waste.

  • It will also raise awareness about the importance of making sustainable choices.

  • I learned that even small changes can make a big difference.



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